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yyyyy
   yaaaaaaaa
           aaaww
                  wwnn
                       nnn
                          nn
                        what a
                     strange mor-
                   -ning to wake up
                  to when the sun bare-
                 -ly graces the treetops
                   and I think to my furry
                   little self that the time
                 has come to prowl  about
              the foggy dawn    dew  and
             make the best    of life as we
            know it be-        -cause really, the                              (p)
           sunrise                  doesn't last for long                      uurrr
           and                         before we realize it we'll           meeowrrrr
           be                             one   with   the   dewdrops    (stretch greet)
         that                              lick my paws – the sun will dry (meeow)                       
            them                              off soon enough and then we'll
                                                           all be nothing more than memories on parched
                                                                                                                        grass.
Just having a bit of fun. :)

Can be read normally from left to right, regardless of spacing. Comments are loved!

Enjoy.


(Written for the first day of NaPoWriMo.)

Edit: A DLD?! :la: Thanks so much to =TwilightPoetess for the feature! :hug:

Subsequent edit: A DD?!?! :squee: I honestly don't know what to say. A million thank yous to =Kneeling-Glory for suggesting and ^Beccalicious for featuring!! :hug:

Also, thank you very much to everyone who has faved and commented - I promise I will get back to all of you in time, and I really appreciate the support! :)
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Given 2012-04-09
waking-cat's morning reflection by ~Adagiobunny Suggester writes: It is not often that people attribute philosophical musings to a cat's morning stretch. A wonderful example of the results of April Fool's caturday art! ( Suggested by LiliWrites and Featured by Beccalicious )
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JustBecause62 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
first piece I ever saw of yours, loved it then & it speaks to me even more now. Very glad I happened to check the DD's that day, or I'd never have met you :)
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Trippy4U Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
So creative...a well deserved award :clap:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know I've featured this piece in my 2012 showcase of literature: [link] :D
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Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
Ahh, thank you so much!! I really appreciate it. :heart:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is probably the best visual poem i have ever seen. i've always wanted to do something like this but i'm terrible at formatting. and the poem itself is just great, and the little meows here and there are just perfect. :clap:
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Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Student Writer
ahh, thank you so much - your comment made my day! the formatting is only a bear if you overthink it (though it is a lot easier on paper than on the computer... :P). you should give it a shot! if it doesn't work out, you can always call it abstract... ;)

glad you liked the meows - i was trying to reflect the way our thoughts overlay our actions. :)
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're very welcome!

it's not so bad i guess, just very time consuming :aww:
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Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Writer
:heart:

ah, so true. though perhaps one day the idea will hit you and the words will fit perfectly with the world. you never know!
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cembree Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've seen a lot of concrete poems about cats, but this one is definitely the best.

1)The poem itself sounds like a cat
2) The poem isn't just forming the outlines of a cat; it is a cat
3) This pose is so dynamic. It brims with life.
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